Script For Caving Activity Received


Attached image shows the "screen" towards the start of the golfing activity, where Kamil must decide where on the "tour boat" to sit. Three of the four corners are occupied by a date, so Kamil can pick one to talk to (or sit on his own). One of the things I have been pondering about is whether to have the menus in first, second or third person. I am thinking about going back to change the ones on Day Zero to "first person", because it makes it feel like Kamil is asking the player what he should do. Second person I do not like because I need to ephasise there is no "self-insert character" here. So it's a choice between first and third person language for me.

I realise it has been nearly an entire month (twenty-three days to be exact) since my last update. Therefore, I felt it was time for another updated. Besides the fact that I have been doing lots of good work tweaking the code, there are other more impactful game content updates and other thoughts to report.

  • Firstly, Day One (the first of five days where you/Kamil can pick an activity to do with the dates) is looking like it shall involve at least 40,000 words in the script. Some passages may be reused in places (depending on which option is/not picked), so depending on how you play, you may see quite a bit less than 40,000 words because this higher estimate is for all of the choices taken together and there will be plenty of choices for the player.
  • Secondly, and perhaps most pertinently, I have come to the conclusion that our little game here is more "a non-adult game that may happen to contain some adult themes/content" rather than a purely adult game. Some people like a "slow-burning romance story" and I have never believed my audience lies with inpatient people. As I have always said to myself and others, the main crux of the game is "talking to the dates and finding out what they like", in order to "maximise the affection scores with each date" rather than simply "here is a dame, go and do lewd things with her".
  • Also, if you like cute couples and dominant dames who love to tease, then this game is for you.
  • Thirdly, I have received the script for the caving activity, so I have been starting to implement that alongside the golfing activity script.
  • Finally, the script for the third and final activity is in the works (along with safeword button scenes) and I should get that when I come back from holiday as next week I am going on holiday.

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